Reviews
Lawrence
Bourke, Poetry Australia, 123/124, The Narrative Challenge:
Daughter by Jessie Lendennie is a moving and impressive
livre compose. formally, an interlinked series of prose
poems, Daughter follows the thoughts and moods of Emma
who confronts the recent death of her mother. The concern
is with personal identity, in particular with the highly
charged material of the death of the mother: love, sorrow,
guilt, emotional overload.
Daughter varies between two
prevalent modes typographically separated. The first
concerns a present, waking world of work and play.
This world of starkly realistic details is the past
which Emma enters through memory eliding into dream;
for instance she dreams of visiting her mother in
hospital:
| Emma
walked along the hospital corridor. She heard
her grandmothers's voice. Her mother's thin, pale
hand touched her own weakly from the high white
bed. |
The
other mode, italicised, at first glance seems the
more conventional dream-material. It is recognizably
closer to lyric poetry with wishful sentimentality,
vague yearning, elusive imagery:
| And
in her heart there was darkness... the gull cry
of darkness, when the winter has come early across
the steep cliffs. (p.61) |
Ironically,
this mode represents the actual, the 'real', the 'now',
Emma in her present bereavement. The poetry glides
between the two; between a painful reality and a vague
emotionalism; between a vital past and a shadowy present;
until the reader see the two are inter-dependent.
It is all time as eternally present, but harder than
Eliot's vision in finding no consolation that time
is redeemable. In Daughte the past is not revised
to console the present: 'the pain was ageless....
timeless' (p. 1)
Daughter
powerfully dramatises a loss which cannot be denied,
as Emma holds fast in memory and dream to her mother,
her emotional centre. In so doing Emma learns what
as a child she was too self-absorbed to notice, the
mother's hard, weary life in a male-centred world.
The pain becomes memory and 'past', it isn't dulled,
it is intensified. The last line encapsulates the
anguish of this paradoxical continuing past: 'and
the child said, "If you love me, take me with you."'
The poet's achievement prepares the reader for this
nakedly sentimental cliche. The seemingly throw-away
and 'fortunate' chiasmus is revealed as inevitable
and exact. It charts Emma's sense of self, the love
which is a loss, a profundity which beggars words
but is shadowed in the poet's design.
Eavan
Boland: "This is an ambitious poetic statement.
It attempts to get at the initial shadows and regrets
which are so formative, finally, on the imagination.
Its use of language is eloquent and concentrated and
its juxtaposition are often daring. Jessie Lendennie
breaks her own ground with verve and determination."
Beth Joselow, The Washington Review: "In Daughter
Jessie Lendennie writes with a spare grace and unsparing
wisdom of the kind of dreams and nightmares that can
never be outgrown. She shines her clear and steady
light on the dark house of childhood, pointing to
what is primal and essential to the way each of us
will experience life to the end of our days"
Roz
Cowman, Graph Magazine: "This is an ambitious
undertaking, but nothing less would do justice to
the haunting quality f the poem. Its theme, the death
of her mother during Jessie's childhood, is developed
partly through the child's consciousness, partly through
an adult dream-state. The distance between the poet's
home in Arkansas, and her preset home in Galway, where
the poem was written, suggests the immense physical
and psychological territory that the poem covers.
"Reading
the poem, I remembered a Victorian illustration to
a lost epic, of which only a fragment remains - 'Childe
Rolande to the Dark Tower came' - where the protagonist
faces the final, most dreadful stage of his journey.
Well, Tolkien has made us familiar with the Dark Tower
now; and its foundations lie where they always have
lain, in lost childhood memories, sense-impressions,
the darkness and fear of childhood that are fearsome
to confront. And they must be confronted, as the poet
has faced them in 'Daughter', for they are both the
bedrock and watertable of our life."
".....this
is the journey of Demeter and Kore: the lovely harvest
scene on page 10, a find of family apotheosis; the
child herself venturing alone in her red dress on
page 44, Kore gathering flowers in the fields of Enna;
the land made bare, lacking its fertilising power;
and the slow descent in the underworld where mother
and child will recover each other. The book closes
on the great prayer of Demeter to her child: 'If you
love me, take me with you'. In this poem, that the
mother is the child, and the child is the mother,
is what the original Mystery is about, after all."
Paddy
Kehoe, In Dublin magazine:
| Emma's
mother was dying. |
| 'Cancer',
her aunt's whispered, 'Cancer.' |
| Emma
did not know the word. Could not stay in the house
with the whispering. She bit her lip, stood in
the doorway looking out |
With
such stark language, Ms. Lendennie conveys quickly
and broodingly the childhood experiences of Emma,
and her relationship with her family, primarily her
mother. The book is designed so as to tell the story,
in brief vignettes, on the left-hand page, with the
private world of her thoughts and dreams on the right,
italicized. While not an original technique (one thinks
of John Berger's 'G') it nonetheless sets up an interesting
counterpoint, and real poetry is achieved:
| In
the darkness She imagined the silence at the centre
of the wind |
| Hoped
for the sound of rain; counted hours, years |
Emma's
bereavement has a heart-wrenching, disturbing edge:
| How
could she know there would be no forgetting? That
she would always remember... that this was her
life, and when they said, "She's grown out of
it" they were wrong, wrong. |
Two
Irishmen have also written poignantly and memorably
of the death of mothers - John McGahern in 'The Leavetaking'
and Aidan Higgins in 'Balcony of Europe'. Ms. Lendennie
manages the same emotional wringing, with a spare,
deft prose:
| Emma's
mother turned in her sleep, trying to rest the
pain Emma did not understand.. only knew she was
the baby, her mother's baby. |
And
that is three lines at the top of an otherwise blank
page - the pregnant silences of Berman's 'Cries and
Whispers', also dealing with death, are recalled.
| Emma
began to hate the sun, the yellow grass, the shadeless
trees; hated the smiling girls in their lovely
patterned dresses. |
An
absorbing exercise in prose poetry....
Philip
Casey, The Sunday Press: Daughter is Jessie Lendennie's
first book. It is in the main an evocation, and maybe
catharsis, of a childhood trauma, the death of a mother
- hastened perhaps by a drunken father. This is a
bare biographical outline and the book is the story
which fills it out.
What
makes it so interesting is its form. The narrative
is in prosaic bursts, but juxtaposed on opposite pages
and in italics are flashes of poetic intensity which
deepen its meaning. This is the point where 'Emma'
has learned that her mother is dying, and the classic
situation of the poor girl amidst affluent neighbours
gives it added poignancy
| Emma
began to hate the sun, the yellow grass, the shadeless
trees; hated the smiling girls in their lovely
patterned dresses. |
Juxtaposed
with this is:
| And
the time was the slowest of movements, and so
late, so late |
| Fine
rain against thin glass, against hard stones...
|
Daughter
is a courageous, original and memorable debut.
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Edward
Power, The Nationalist : ".... The writing is
startlingly beautiful:
| In
the dark she traced a circle around the willow
tree, |
| knew
the tree could not go beyond, for all its weeping
|
The
image of the willow tree, among others, recurs throughout
the narrative, adding to the haunting, almost gothic,
quality. Ezra Pound described an 'image' as that which
presents an intellectual or emotional complex within
an instant of time. I'd be inclined to extend this
to apply to Jessie Lendennie's book, and say that
Daughter presents an intellectual and emotional complex
within beautifully crafted instants of life and time.
Her poetic style acts as a prism, so that the 'clear
and steady light' Lendennie shines on the 'dark house
of her childhood' is refracted and re-housed in the
being of the reader. It is a light that sometimes
hurts the inner eye to unsheddable tears, and I must
confess, while reading this book, to being moved to
shedding one or two..."
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